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  • About me: I am an outgoing and fun person, who loves to dance.

  • My Essays:

    • Essay #1 How Dance relates to school
    • Essay #2 Different resources to help you succeed in college
    • Essay #3 Crash
    • Essay #4: [Title]
    • Personal Reflection Assessment #1: MidTerm Assessment
  • Personal Reflection (Assessment #2: Final Exam)

    Self-Assessment There were many essays I have done to improve in my writing. I have done essays that reflect to college success and essays about a film “Crash”. In these essays I believe there was great success into completing them. Some of the essays I would say needed some improvement in some areas. Overall, I have learned many of the importances on writing an essay. In the majority of my essays they were successful. In some of the essays I explained my passion for dance. I used dance as an example for topics such as; how it can help someone be successful in college, and what it brings as a responsibility. I believe my essays were meaningful to get the point across. I tried to give a strong and powerful vocabulary. And with the main points I gave strong detail. These essays also could have used some improvement. Some of my essays were a little short. If there was an extension of time I believe I could have been more expressive and gone more into detail with each essay. I also could have done some more research on the individual topics to give a stronger image on the essay itself. For all of the essays I have learned about each one as I completed them. Each of the essays taught me the importance’s of explaining a topic in order. Making sure you edit and revise an essay was also important. I have also learned that writing an essay can help someone picture the point that you are trying to get across. I have learned as a writer, when writing an essay it takes time, thought, and importance. In my conclusion of my findings, I have explained what essays I have learned from. How I believed the essays were successful or not. The many improvements that I could have made to complete the essays. What I have learned from the essays, and as a writer myself.




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ken196 little mermaid 1 Nov 28 2007, 1:30 PM EST by ronnieca$h
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lion king is better
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axel10 introduction 0 Nov 28 2007, 11:07 AM EST by axel10
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Nice pic of the little mermaid. I see that you like to dance. cool! dance its a really good thing to do. I like to dance too, when I'm not playing soccer I'm dancing.dance keep you aCtive. I really like your page, the picture is so nice.. Keep dancing and someday you arre going to become a professional dancer.
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