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Assignment Number 6 I did my essay number four on the freedom of religion. In it I talked about how the Constitution gives religious rights and also about how it is suppose to protect the religious rights and the people who believe them. I showed why many people believe we should leave religion out of politics and I showed the other side of the argument about how people think we need to keep religion in our political lives. Overall I think I did a pretty good job of showing that while the Constitution gives us freedom of religious rights many states and courts all around the nation do not share the Constitutions beliefs and have taken matters on some religious rights into their own hands. I also think I did a pretty good job of showing both sides of the argument, the side for religious freedom and the side against it. I I think some of my thoughts maybe unclear or repeated. I admit that I struggled with some of the concepts of writing this paper and did not fully understand all that I was suppose to write about. I also think I still had some grammatical and structural errors in my paper. I probably should have asked for more help on the paper but I did not and that was my fault. All in all though I think I did not do to badly with proving my position and the position of others in my paper. I still have a lot to work on and I will try even harder next time. I learned a lot when I did this assignment. I learned that the Constitution does protect our religious rights, it just depends on how the court and government perceives what the Constitution says on religious rights and how they should be allowed.





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