• About me: This may be an introduction, yet what can I say my name is Walter I am a friendly person get along with everyone. I am finishing my first semester of college this is exiting.

• My Essays:

• • Essay #1: Essay #1: Study Habits
  • Essay #2: People and places outside of campus
    
  • Essay #3: Super Size Me Reaction
    
  • Essay #4: Deciding of going to college
  • Personal Reflection Assessment #1: MidTerm Assessment

• Personal Reflection (Assessment #2: Final Exam)

While writing an essay factors can occur are essays that where successful, skills that need improvement, and the learning that has occurred while writing assigned essays. Essays that where successful where I have to say essay number four which was titled Super Size Me Reflection. This essay has made the chance for me to express my feeling about the particular movie and my thoughts about it. This also had given me the chance to reflect on the plot of the movie on how it relates to the real world of today. Another Essay that was fame was essay five which was deciding on going to college this has gave me a chance to write a cause or effect of something by only choosing one side of the subject that I have selected. This has also given me the chance to do this on my own pick my own subject and do the writing process on my own. These are just some of the essay's that had made me a better writer. While writing essay's it seem that I lack on some skills and decently need some improvement on. The problems that I need definite improve on are writing longer sentences and not writing sentence fragments, the usage of more vocabulary words, and paragraphs need to be longer than five sentences. What I would improve on if I had more time it would be the usage of using more vocabulary words. This would serve as a more sincere to my writing assignment and would make more since with other big vocabulary words. These are the things that I need improvement on while writing essays. The learning that has occurred while writing assigned essay was being self deciplen on getting the work done and make since out of it. While in the other hand I have learned to use concept maps and the use of an outline to plan out your ideas before writing the essay. To think realistically about the topic that you are about to write and make it your own personal one not some other persons. Come up with original work concept of your own sincere work. This is what I learned as the assigned essays where given during the course of the semester. Writing essays in this course had thought me the basics of just the different types of essays and the different ones that there are. More over I had some successful essay and I am proud of them while I do still need some improvement over time I will get better with my writing the more I practice this. Over all there has been a lot of learning while the assigned essays where given and I feel that I have improve a lot on my own. This class has been an over all successful one with the basics just for me to improve upon. This is all that I have learned over the course of writing essay after essay.